man I can’t believe I hadn’t thought of hippos. There is definitely going to be at least one hippo. Thanks for the feedback. Agree about Dicer; I suppose I could squeeze more out of him by extending the sequence in the lake house, although I have to think more about the purpose of that scene and where it can be improved. Otherwise, he’ll have to wait until the next book for more screen time. There Jet Skiing Gets Me Wet Vintage T-Shirt definitely some Godzilla/Kaiju inspirations for the monster at the end! I wanted something with scale, escalating size/food chain being a recurring theme in the series – “there’s always a bigger fish” Glad you liked it! I’m going to take several months to revise before starting on the next one, but I have high hopes for it as well 🙂
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How about Lamprey eels? They’d be pretty spooky scary to face off against. I’m suddenly getting the distinct idea that the reason herbivores aren’t common is because they would be eating the Forest and the Forest doesn’t want to be eaten actively. It’d rather be decomposed when the nodes need replaced. As for Dicer, I think just little cameo spots would be good. He doesn’t need whole scenes created for him. He’s only really been in a total of 3 chapters or so. Jet Skiing Gets Me Wet Vintage T-Shirt Maybe one relating how he and Hollywood know each other. (Maybe show some camaraderie on why) But more of the “chugs whole carton of OJ and crushes it” YEEEEAA. Perhaps he’s got an impressive collection of bandannas, or Tetris manages to get Dicer’s clothes pretty good so he just rips it off and goes all hulkmania on him brother.
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I’m Jet Skiing Gets Me Wet Vintage T-Shirt thinking now it’s just the imagery that would be more fun. Take my feedback as you may! (They’re just my thoughts turned inside out, sorry if they seem too forceful.) That was fantastic. The way you write literally baffles me because it is insanely good and leaves almost nothing to be desired(other than some more about Dicer), which really is what grabbed my attention when I read the first part of these beautifully written books. Cheers for finishing the second book and I can’t wait for more! I want more about him too haha I just don’t think there’s space for him earlier in the book and I’m not sure what else to add without bogging things down later on. Will definitely put some thought into it. I think if I developed the other characters better they could be similarly interesting.